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Post by bock on Mon Dec 29, 2008 9:53 pm

k axl7777 you need to help me contribute to the story line last time i did this you said you need to program what? no come up with a story that would not be out of my capability of doing



ok heres what i got up to on my story line!!!


you start off in the game seeing astorids fall in the background of a game entry showing the game programmer design ect. well after that you are at your house master Haru tell you to go do some things and among one of them he asks you if you can go mine some ore"s for him! you go and you pass a girl sitting on the tree depressed you have seen her all the time so you go over to talk to her she likes you you get her to giggle and you tell her that you have to leave and go mine ores you do you walk away a little when you hear a giant crash out of no where well space anyways shard and chucks of rock come and hit the ground one hitting jack the girl from the tree comes to help but right after she left the shielding of the tree she was stuck en with a rock too! then rocks spin around jacks head and around him on the ground he notices an ocward glow when he finnaly had enough strength to look back he could see the girls hand sticking up out of the ground he got up and ran the rocks fell and crumbled once he had left the spot where they had circled him he ran to the girl wich by now her hand was sticking out of the ground he got to her but when he looked he saw here hanging she was yelling for help but she wasn't falling into a hole the astroid made she was falling into a swirling vortex jack got her hand and like if some one where pulling them in they both fell in they both where floating through it until they fell

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Post by Sn1p3r Sh4wn on Tue Dec 30, 2008 12:39 am

I could understand it better if you had better spelling and punctuation, but I get the idea.

Okay, I'll get started on the asteroids now.
I'm making 4, so that you can make copies in different patterns.
It's like the Marines in Halo. You can see the same guy that died in the first level at Crow's nest.

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Post by bock on Tue Dec 30, 2008 6:54 pm

ausome heres the previous picture please make sure its about the same quality




plus


check out my site my new site through this i frame if you can not see the pag the link s provided below

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Post by bock on Tue Dec 30, 2008 7:17 pm

on about us you will see a note book click on the edge of it at and pull the book open

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Post by Alex on Tue Dec 30, 2008 7:34 pm

Okay, but it is only showing "Home" on it. Change the Copyright to "The Order of the Pie" for now. I am thinking we should change our name.
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Post by Alex on Tue Dec 30, 2008 7:36 pm

Okay, now it's working.
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Post by Alex on Tue Dec 30, 2008 7:38 pm

I would try to make new charachter graphics, those are all defaults.
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Post by bock on Tue Dec 30, 2008 8:01 pm

i know this is the girl chrater i don't have a name for her yt but i will adventuly give me a name dude

please do not post this picture all over the place because im going to use it

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Post by Sn1p3r Sh4wn on Tue Dec 30, 2008 8:08 pm

DUDE WHATS THE SONG NAME FOR YOUR WEBSITE HOMEPAGE???
That's very good music!

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Post by bock on Tue Dec 30, 2008 8:17 pm

i'll give it to you if you want! no one has a copy right on it! so i gots the power

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Post by Sn1p3r Sh4wn on Tue Dec 30, 2008 8:23 pm

BTW fixed.

You start off in the game seeing asteroids fall in the background of a game entry showing the game programmer design ect. After that you are at your house, and master and Haru tells you to go do some things and among one of them he asks you if you can go mine some ore for him, as he is a master weapon smith! You go and you pass a girl sitting on a tree, depressed. You have seen her on almost all of your trips to the mine. You go over to talk to her. She likes you. You cheer her up with a joke. Then you tell her that you have to leave and go mine ores. As you start to walk away, you hear a giant crash out of no where. There is a picture of the sky at sunset with asteroids falling from the sky. You see shards and chunks of rock and metal come crashing to the ground. One hits jack. The girl from the tree comes to help but right after she left the shielding of the tree she was struck with a rock too! Then rocks spin around jacks head and around him on the ground he notices an awkward glow. When he finally had enough strength to look back he could see the girls hand sticking up out of the rubble. He got up and ran desperately toward her, but by now her hand had slipped through the rubble. She was completely buried. He got to her but when he tried to move the rubble, all of the rocks suddenly fell into what looked like a black hole. he saw here hanging a ways down on a tree root. She was yelling for help, but Jack couldn't reach her. There was a sudden strong pull of air downward into the hole, pulling both her and Jack into a portal the asteroid debris made. she was falling into a swirling vortex. Jack got her hand on his fall down, they both fall in. Everything turned black, and they both passed out. They both awoke to a strange new world...

What do you think?
I changed some of the parts, but kept the main idea the same.


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Post by Sn1p3r Sh4wn on Tue Dec 30, 2008 8:23 pm

bock wrote:i'll give it to you if you want! no one has a copy right on it! so i gots the power
Link Pl0x!!!

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Post by bock on Tue Dec 30, 2008 8:47 pm

http://postdownload.filefront.com/12819832//a1955db050f86a76d34bd33ad00476e0d1e7b711f7727047d9c04ce061a1a4837f3a41421bab2b59


theres the link plus i want them to get separated and shes used to do bad things ect and he has to save her and by doing that they will save the two worlds as well

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Post by bock on Tue Dec 30, 2008 9:00 pm

dude sean download halo nations tool bar it safe trust me and its only 1mb http://halonationtoolbar.ourtoolbar.com/


it gives you the latest topics, a radio, weather, our custom search engine,and a little bit more


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Post by Alex on Tue Dec 30, 2008 9:23 pm

Sn1p3r Sh4wn can be an official script-writer. Did you make that pic in photoshop, it's good. You know, games isn't all we can make, I beleive if we get better tools we can make shows or something. That pic looked almost like a manga or anime, and I like that. I think I work best under the role of Director or Manager since I run the staff and that kind of stuff.

We need to form a real team, three people isn't enough really. I will see if I can find some people with talent in programming, art, script-writing, and voice-acting.
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Post by bock on Tue Dec 30, 2008 9:35 pm


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Post by Sn1p3r Sh4wn on Tue Dec 30, 2008 10:08 pm

Axl777 wrote:Sn1p3r Sh4wn can be an official script-writer. Did you make that pic in photoshop, it's good. You know, games isn't all we can make, I beleive if we get better tools we can make shows or something. That pic looked almost like a manga or anime, and I like that. I think I work best under the role of Director or Manager since I run the staff and that kind of stuff.

We need to form a real team, three people isn't enough really. I will see if I can find some people with talent in programming, art, script-writing, and voice-acting.
I can be a script writer and a voice actor if someone has a deeper voice than normal.
I can play a bad guy or a good guy.

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Post by bock on Tue Dec 30, 2008 10:31 pm

i did it i officaly have faces for my game charaters


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Post by Sn1p3r Sh4wn on Tue Dec 30, 2008 10:55 pm

Mmmmmkay...

So, I've finished chapter 1...
Now for 2 where they'll get separated...
I'll make a new topic that only mods + can post on.

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Post by bock on Tue Dec 30, 2008 11:07 pm

? ok

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Post by bock on Tue Dec 30, 2008 11:09 pm

have a board game thats lets you make you own monoply

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Post by Alex on Mon Jan 05, 2009 9:40 pm

This is one anime I like, it's Code Geass it comes with lots of action:

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Post by Sn1p3r Sh4wn on Tue Jan 06, 2009 9:18 pm

Yeah. I watch that one too.

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Post by bock on Tue Jan 06, 2009 9:21 pm

its ok i prefer death note though

well i have made freind with a very popular forum and now one of the admins on it Smile

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